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Neat Storyline

I love the storyline, the costume & when u using the First-Person view. But the graphic/art need more works.

I'm not judging your artistic value, just try to make it better character design. Oh, AND THE BACKGROUND TOO!
Do this, you'll receive a 4 vote.

But for now, I give u 3/5 & 6/10.
Cheers!

P.S: There's some typo too. (E.G: Planat, CORRECTION: Planet)

legendaryshiled responds:

ok i will improve on the backround design and animation and character design and my spelling LOL.but thanks for the review=) and i am glad you liked it.

Average

It's an average movie. I would give it higher IF u replace the character into an at least half human - stick form.

Cuz I personally hate a prop + another prop as face. Which in this case, fruit + locks.
Sorry. BUT I do love the credit song tho.

Krebskopf responds:

Fair enough, thanks for the review. Also yeah Metallica r kool.

Fantastic!

The story line are packed with action + comedy. I love it!

danomano65 responds:

Indeed.

Here what I got to say..

Love the concept that u've telling the truth just about everything in this movie..
Love the freestyle talk, and that make me crazy enuff' to add this movie to my favorite & vote it high even tho I submitted my own flash today.

Anyway, congratz, stay crazy.

Here's what I think..

The animation was smooth... Nice drawing style.
Could be longer, maybe?
A simple animation but affective. Good attempt.
4/5 & 8/10.
Juz don't shoot me! :-X

Slackman responds:

Well I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on length, but I don't have a lot of free time to work in so it's tough to make something really long. Since you gave me a 4/5, I guess I won't shoot you... this time... Thanks for the kind words man!

Quite Interesting

It was quite good BUT you could use a voice actor for the script, that will attract the viewer to continuing to view the submission. IF you need the link for the forum to find some good but amateur Voice Actor/Actress, juz PM me.

Anyway, I think this one lacking of angle. Try to use more variety angle next time. Like view from the back, 3-4, and some other more.

Overal, GOOD!

Manga-Otaku responds:

Thanks for the offer!

I'll consider that eventually!

Although I'll be voicing Damaged: Episode V in Japanese.

Great Stuff!

This is great. The storyline are full of humor, and the animation are well done.

I dont know how some other jackass rate this 2/10. Well-done!

5/5 & 10/10

Good attempt

The animation was okay, but just an okay. The only thing that keeping me watching is the story line and the scenery tho. The drawing could be better.

Overall, I enjoyed it. and voted:
4/5
8/10

Cheers, mate!

RPGsrok responds:

Glad you liked the scenery and stuff. If you watch my other animation (though most of it looks like crap now. . .) you'll find that my strength has always been scenery; I suck as drawing moving people. I'm very proud of the story line and if you guys want me to, (PM me to say so) I'll make a direct sequel that will expand upon this particular story. I may also make something that expands on the universe that Dual Arms (as a series) takes place in. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.

Magnificently Done

Congratz on.. the.. the.. EVERYTHING u've done to this one. I love evry pixel of it.

Hoping for the 2nd reel... Anytime Now....
Yupp......

5/5 & 10/10

Awesomely Done

Well, the animation are quite good for me anyway. But the only thing that is been bothering me is the speed or the duration for certain scene. Such as the time the goddess giving her hand, it should be faster, I THINK.

Unless there's a reason for it, it's cool then. Finally, good animation & arts. Cheers!

one UMMAH is what we need right now...

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