Looks neat, but that intro is annoying and lasts too long after the guy finishes talking.
one UMMAH is what we need right now...
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Thanks for commenting. You can always just skip the intro, simply click the button provided. And thanks for the critic, I will try not to make the story too "draggy" for the next episode.
Thanks!
I didn't technically leave a review because you said that that isn't very nice to talk about the writer's shortcomings. D:
So I just complimented it.
LOL, Good one! Thanks for the compliment.
^_^
Sorry, I meant the very first intro, the "HUSH animation" thing. "The masterpiece is approaching" is annoying, and when he finished talking it waits awhile in silence, I wasn't sure what was going on. The regular intro to the story is fine, and the story itself isn't draggy at all. Quite good.
Oh, okay. I just leave a long gap for ppl to remember the name of the crew. LOL
Since you don't like it, I will try to shorten it on the next submission. :P
please keep me informed :D
i'll wait for the whole series xD
Since you added the episode into your fav list. I'm sure u won't be missed out. LOL
Finally!
Current Score
3.88 / 5.00 (+ 0.0023)
I helped put it from 3.87 to 3.88! No need to thank me.
LOL, Okay!
No thanks to you :P
Devex
Just saw it, Fantastic.
akoRn
Aw thanks man!
Appreciate it. Hope you left a review! ^_^