akoRn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FullBodied Madness]

This is worth it!

This is worth to watch than those crappy madness clone submission. Really love the way u organize the fighting sequence, animation are smooth, but still could improve. The part where the hero throw grenade but didn't hurt himself doesn't make sense, but since this is a cartoon, I guess it's ok. LOL

This need a higher score!

Kku responds:

Thanks... I'm already better than when I started so yea I'm gradually getting better.

[DevilSlayer IV]

Not Dissapointed!

Hey, I really love this one compared to your previous works. This is because I see more frame-to-frame technique rather than tweening. Anyway, your design style are still tip-TOP and hope you'll keep this up with your next one.

Keep going! =]

JazLyte responds:

Thanks man! You know I will!

[the lonely day]

A good start.

The animation was impressive, for a first submission. Anyway, I'm trying to go easy on u since this is ur first. The thing u need to concerned is the drawing. You need to neat it up abit. So like when ppl sees it, they would be like, "Aaaarhh". Instead of "Umm, yeah... Okay"

I hope you get my point here. This is certainly a good one for a 1st-submission. Hope to see a better one next time, yah ?

Oh, I can't really say I love the song tho. Due to something that I wouldnt mention here. =P (But this doesn't affect the vote at all)

lesscontrolled responds:

thanks! and yes i do get your point. i just thought i'd keep it simple for a first submission. :P

[Baby's first words]

It went Well

I see you you studied alot on the balloon motion, and it really look alot like how will balloon behave. You could add more detail into the animation tho, like shadow for the balloon.

3/5, 6/10.
Cheers

cheekyfecker responds:

Dammit...i meant to do that and forgot all about it !!

[Street Cats]

Nice story line & script.

Hey, nice storyline. But that's all there is, maybe next time you could improve your animation, ey?

Good luck!

Cryomancer responds:

I'm glad you liked the story, but man... Don't run down my animating. I try my best and i do it for people's entertainment. And i think its pretty well done anyway. Sorry I don't have time to animate in frame by frame.

You might take something positive from this: http://metalmaverick.newgrounds.com/n ews/post/93142

[Animation 3 Final Project]

Average

Hey, I noticed that the character was inspired by Fairly Odd Parent, huh? Since u managed to mention it in your comment, I guess it's no big deal.

I might not be a pro in flash (due for not taking any class at all), but I think there's a room for improvement. Like make the camera go shake abit when the female character push the dude with her power.

Anyway, it's an average work.
3/5
6/10

Cheers!

KlinKlinK responds:

I would have added more (like the camera shakes), but it wouldn't have fit with the other animations in the class. Remember, every animation was meant to be compiled into one huge movie file (Quicktime I suppose since the uni I go to loves Macs). Think of it like the show 'Creature Comforts'.

Thanks for the review.

[LOZ: SOD III]

Well Done

The works are good. Good on the srpite. Just hope you can use your own art for animation. CAUSE I'm not into sprite too much.

The story abit slow, but still okay. I would give it 5/5 IF it's not a sprite.
Just 6/10 & 4/5 will do for now.

mad-dave responds:

thanks man

[Age of Wars!]

Neat Storyline

I love the storyline, the costume & when u using the First-Person view. But the graphic/art need more works.

I'm not judging your artistic value, just try to make it better character design. Oh, AND THE BACKGROUND TOO!
Do this, you'll receive a 4 vote.

But for now, I give u 3/5 & 6/10.
Cheers!

P.S: There's some typo too. (E.G: Planat, CORRECTION: Planet)

legendaryshiled responds:

ok i will improve on the backround design and animation and character design and my spelling LOL.but thanks for the review=) and i am glad you liked it.

[Electric Fishtank: Shit!]

Average

It's an average movie. I would give it higher IF u replace the character into an at least half human - stick form.

Cuz I personally hate a prop + another prop as face. Which in this case, fruit + locks.
Sorry. BUT I do love the credit song tho.

Krebskopf responds:

Fair enough, thanks for the review. Also yeah Metallica r kool.

[HALOMEN2]

Fantastic!

The story line are packed with action + comedy. I love it!

danomano65 responds:

Indeed.