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[Hey Joe]

Here's what I think..

The animation was smooth... Nice drawing style.
Could be longer, maybe?
A simple animation but affective. Good attempt.
4/5 & 8/10.
Juz don't shoot me! :-X

Slackman responds:

Well I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on length, but I don't have a lot of free time to work in so it's tough to make something really long. Since you gave me a 4/5, I guess I won't shoot you... this time... Thanks for the kind words man!

[Damaged 0rigins]

Quite Interesting

It was quite good BUT you could use a voice actor for the script, that will attract the viewer to continuing to view the submission. IF you need the link for the forum to find some good but amateur Voice Actor/Actress, juz PM me.

Anyway, I think this one lacking of angle. Try to use more variety angle next time. Like view from the back, 3-4, and some other more.

Overal, GOOD!

Manga-Otaku responds:

Thanks for the offer!

I'll consider that eventually!

Although I'll be voicing Damaged: Episode V in Japanese.

[Dual Arms: Precipice]

Good attempt

The animation was okay, but just an okay. The only thing that keeping me watching is the story line and the scenery tho. The drawing could be better.

Overall, I enjoyed it. and voted:
4/5
8/10

Cheers, mate!

RPGsrok responds:

Glad you liked the scenery and stuff. If you watch my other animation (though most of it looks like crap now. . .) you'll find that my strength has always been scenery; I suck as drawing moving people. I'm very proud of the story line and if you guys want me to, (PM me to say so) I'll make a direct sequel that will expand upon this particular story. I may also make something that expands on the universe that Dual Arms (as a series) takes place in. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.

[The animal student]

Brilliant!

First of all, congratulation on the graphic. The character look very alive & the atmosphere/ background are breath taking.

Anyway, I would advice to be more careful with the story line, as ppl of NG is a blood thirsty [they love violence]. Finally, good luck!!!

MATSUMO responds:

Thank you very much for your advice. It'll be expected to exhibit the first account of this chapter by the place next week, and I'm here. I'll make hard.

[MetalSlugMission2]

Too Fast!

First of all, its good to have a good old classic + legendary game being use as a flash movie these day. So I congrats u for that.

Anyway, the animation a waaaay too fast, and u maybe need to add some SFX/audio.
And for that, I can only give u an average 4/10.

Sry. And good luck next time, ey?

luke734 responds:

Yah man I know it went way to fast. I am so sorry. I will be spending more time on the next one and doing it a lot better. I am still pretty new to flash and all.
And I am learning more stuff and tricks each day!

Thanks for the review!