akoRn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shinobi Noir- Prologue]

good try

hey. it was a good attempt. consist some good animation. what really bothers me is the tempo. there's juz too much empty/silent moment that make the animation looks amateur instead of dramatic or 'depress' as u stated.

good try.

[Man vs Cockroach]

potential

I see some potential in the animation. It juz lacks of tempo. Also, try to choose a better music. It seems abit awkward at the moment. Also, u can also add an ambience sfx to make ur story telling more lively.

I gave a 5, to increase ur score & and 8 becuz I see u got the imaginaton. GOOD JOB! =]

somezombie responds:

Thanks for the tips man

[Gone: Machine's Torment]

Too slow pace..

Hey,

I see u got that vision to go for 'big shot' animation.. but I would first suggest u work on ur animation, from there, u can develope ur style. I can also see that u more into limited animation, which is fine. But again, try to improve ur animation and drawing..

I was once also excited about photoshop or any other bitmap/raster software, but I would tell u now, u got everything u need with the drawing tools in Flash.
Anyway, Im juz sharing my experience, cuz if u check out my old work, they're suckier than this..

So, I should juz giv advice, no heavy critic or shitty talk. :P

Good job. =]

-Haizeel

[//Necropolis Synergy]

thats awesome!!

aw man, u're gettin better, n VERY GOOD at this!
Always love ur style man, wish I improved my fbf like u did. xD

JazLyte responds:

Thanks bruh, preciate it :) Keep practicing then, I wanna see an episode 5! where have you been? lol

[Modern Warfare 1]

Foolish attempt

Hey there, I found the overall movie was rather pathetic and sad. I don't usually just throw out everything I had in mind when it comes to reviewing. But this just awful... The voice-over is ridiculous, bad quality and bad voice over. the aniamtion is considered HALF-not bad, much room for improvement. The graphic and art, well, just like a drawing by 4 years old child. I've seen my nephew drawn better transportation vehicle than this.. Hope for an improvement.. Good luck!

[El Fin]

SALUTE!

Hey.. an awesome debut!!! Added u to my fav artist, cuz I believe u can create something wonderful in ur next projects. haha..

VERY VERY impressive first project! hehee

Pegosho responds:

Thanks alot akoRn! :)

[Pursuit of the Falcon]

Admire Your Effort!

Hey, almost everything was fit well based on the movies. Even though I found that u can improve ur drawing, but u're certainly a GREAT animator. Good job!

[Nervous Steve's Ride]

Love it.

This is classic! Mute comedy cartoon.
Love the expression and the way Steve rub his hand together, very.. nervous-ing.
LOL. 5/5 and 10/10