akoRn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shinobi Noir- Prologue]

good try

hey. it was a good attempt. consist some good animation. what really bothers me is the tempo. there's juz too much empty/silent moment that make the animation looks amateur instead of dramatic or 'depress' as u stated.

good try.

[Man vs Cockroach]

potential

I see some potential in the animation. It juz lacks of tempo. Also, try to choose a better music. It seems abit awkward at the moment. Also, u can also add an ambience sfx to make ur story telling more lively.

I gave a 5, to increase ur score & and 8 becuz I see u got the imaginaton. GOOD JOB! =]

somezombie responds:

Thanks for the tips man

[Gone: Machine's Torment]

Too slow pace..

Hey,

I see u got that vision to go for 'big shot' animation.. but I would first suggest u work on ur animation, from there, u can develope ur style. I can also see that u more into limited animation, which is fine. But again, try to improve ur animation and drawing..

I was once also excited about photoshop or any other bitmap/raster software, but I would tell u now, u got everything u need with the drawing tools in Flash.
Anyway, Im juz sharing my experience, cuz if u check out my old work, they're suckier than this..

So, I should juz giv advice, no heavy critic or shitty talk. :P

Good job. =]

-Haizeel

[//Necropolis Synergy]

thats awesome!!

aw man, u're gettin better, n VERY GOOD at this!
Always love ur style man, wish I improved my fbf like u did. xD

JazLyte responds:

Thanks bruh, preciate it :) Keep practicing then, I wanna see an episode 5! where have you been? lol

[Jossos Stickman]

deserve way better

damn u who vote low, this consist of some good animation!! if u don't appreciate art, then stop consuming....

jossospro responds:

The bastards

[Modern Warfare 1]

Foolish attempt

Hey there, I found the overall movie was rather pathetic and sad. I don't usually just throw out everything I had in mind when it comes to reviewing. But this just awful... The voice-over is ridiculous, bad quality and bad voice over. the aniamtion is considered HALF-not bad, much room for improvement. The graphic and art, well, just like a drawing by 4 years old child. I've seen my nephew drawn better transportation vehicle than this.. Hope for an improvement.. Good luck!

[El Fin]

SALUTE!

Hey.. an awesome debut!!! Added u to my fav artist, cuz I believe u can create something wonderful in ur next projects. haha..

VERY VERY impressive first project! hehee

Pegosho responds:

Thanks alot akoRn! :)

[I've Been Working Hard]

nice

Hey, I cant help but to notice hw a good animator u r.. smooth animation, but strongly could improve the art tho. Maybe add a clr would help.

Good luck for more projects!

Cantdoright responds:

Well it was due in four days and not muh an get done it that time, but color for sure in my next one. Maybe another animation for TMBG. Thanks for the comments.

[Pursuit of the Falcon]

Admire Your Effort!

Hey, almost everything was fit well based on the movies. Even though I found that u can improve ur drawing, but u're certainly a GREAT animator. Good job!

[Nervous Steve's Ride]

Love it.

This is classic! Mute comedy cartoon.
Love the expression and the way Steve rub his hand together, very.. nervous-ing.
LOL. 5/5 and 10/10