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[TAoJMaTG]

Alright

Hey, it wqas good for a first attempt. Need more frame by frame animation though, or at least more decent tweening. Hope for an improvement on the next one.

You will work on a new project one, right? LOL

[FullBodied Madness]

This is worth it!

This is worth to watch than those crappy madness clone submission. Really love the way u organize the fighting sequence, animation are smooth, but still could improve. The part where the hero throw grenade but didn't hurt himself doesn't make sense, but since this is a cartoon, I guess it's ok. LOL

This need a higher score!

Kku responds:

Thanks... I'm already better than when I started so yea I'm gradually getting better.

[- Kaos Fight -]

Exciting

I had to admit, this is a very exciting short movie. But I don't really enjoy stick animation, unless it had it's own unique style, which is what u're lacking here. Sorry.. But I still like the animation.

Could add a background music tho, to make it more exciting! It's not bad, juz lack of self-unique-tibility? =P

[Bleeding Hearts]

Dark, Cool..

Hey, kinda like this one. The storyline are & style are well-planned. It just some part of the animation seems abit choppy & uncertain to me. Maybe u could use a different fps? Not sure what u're using now, 12, or 24 ?? If 24, maybe u could shorten the distance between keyframe.

Hey, it's not bad, juz missing abit of "magic". :)

[Rave: A Short Movie]

Alright Fort a Start

Hey, I love the storylin even tho I don't dig these kind of genre too much. Anyway, you could add more feeling to the character, especially during the guy are feeling lonely, but since this is ur first, I gonna be soft on ya. LOL

Anyway, please add in more SFX, and maybe a voice-over audio to strengthen your movie.

Good job!

[Leroy's Magical Pumpkin]

Fun, Funny & Funnier

Yo,

I've waited for this movie to be release. And thank god it is now release! LOL. It's quite awhile since I watch the last demo from u. Anyway, the animation are smooth. You might want to focus on your background on the next one tho..

Good job, dude.

[DevilSlayer IV]

Not Dissapointed!

Hey, I really love this one compared to your previous works. This is because I see more frame-to-frame technique rather than tweening. Anyway, your design style are still tip-TOP and hope you'll keep this up with your next one.

Keep going! =]

JazLyte responds:

Thanks man! You know I will!

[the lonely day]

A good start.

The animation was impressive, for a first submission. Anyway, I'm trying to go easy on u since this is ur first. The thing u need to concerned is the drawing. You need to neat it up abit. So like when ppl sees it, they would be like, "Aaaarhh". Instead of "Umm, yeah... Okay"

I hope you get my point here. This is certainly a good one for a 1st-submission. Hope to see a better one next time, yah ?

Oh, I can't really say I love the song tho. Due to something that I wouldnt mention here. =P (But this doesn't affect the vote at all)

lesscontrolled responds:

thanks! and yes i do get your point. i just thought i'd keep it simple for a first submission. :P

[TastelessCandy - Ep3]

I'm Loving It

I don't know bout' the others viewer, but I find this one has an amazing creative value. Yeah, it's short, but since you've mentioned it on the comment, I won't discuss it here.

Anyway, it'll be better if you could make a better lip sync that match with the lines tho. Other than that, it's all good!

5/5 , 9/10

[JUSTICE'd]

Ahh, alright

At first, I was like, this is going no where. But then, the storyline (if there's any. LOL jk) starts to build up. And became a cool situation.

Love the drawing style and the pop-ing up subtitles. :)
4/5 , 8/10