akoRn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Friends of Helimon: demo]

Something might happen here..

Hey, I think the animation are good, and I also sees that you're very good at drawing too. But to catch ppl's attention, I suggest that you neat things up. And also, try to make a background.

You still can use the Black and White concept, but again, neat it up. Like the SpeedAnim or something that been released recently.

7/10
3/5

[I'll Love You Forever]

Cool

The movie are good. Good storyline & voice over. Might want to improve on the art tho

(Even tho I know it's your cartoon style)

[Baby's first words]

It went Well

I see you you studied alot on the balloon motion, and it really look alot like how will balloon behave. You could add more detail into the animation tho, like shadow for the balloon.

3/5, 6/10.
Cheers

cheekyfecker responds:

Dammit...i meant to do that and forgot all about it !!

[Street Cats]

Nice story line & script.

Hey, nice storyline. But that's all there is, maybe next time you could improve your animation, ey?

Good luck!

Cryomancer responds:

I'm glad you liked the story, but man... Don't run down my animating. I try my best and i do it for people's entertainment. And i think its pretty well done anyway. Sorry I don't have time to animate in frame by frame.

You might take something positive from this: http://metalmaverick.newgrounds.com/n ews/post/93142

[Animation 3 Final Project]

Average

Hey, I noticed that the character was inspired by Fairly Odd Parent, huh? Since u managed to mention it in your comment, I guess it's no big deal.

I might not be a pro in flash (due for not taking any class at all), but I think there's a room for improvement. Like make the camera go shake abit when the female character push the dude with her power.

Anyway, it's an average work.
3/5
6/10

Cheers!

KlinKlinK responds:

I would have added more (like the camera shakes), but it wouldn't have fit with the other animations in the class. Remember, every animation was meant to be compiled into one huge movie file (Quicktime I suppose since the uni I go to loves Macs). Think of it like the show 'Creature Comforts'.

Thanks for the review.

[LOZ: SOD III]

Well Done

The works are good. Good on the srpite. Just hope you can use your own art for animation. CAUSE I'm not into sprite too much.

The story abit slow, but still okay. I would give it 5/5 IF it's not a sprite.
Just 6/10 & 4/5 will do for now.

mad-dave responds:

thanks man

[Rainbowman Movie]

Not bad at all

It's not too bad, or too good.
Just slightly above average I guess.

I just wish that you're a better artist tho. Cuz it'll might take u somewhere.

[XXXI 1 : Outcast]

Fantastic

I love the detail of the character & background. This is waay better than the other side view animation I've seen like Madness, Stick shit and etc.

The code button worked, thats cool. And very very love the dancing scene when u pressed D' button at the menu.

Keep it up!

[Magician]

Well-Done

The overall presentation are superb!
Keep it up! ^_^

[combativness]

Average Rating

The animation are okay & well-done. The character design could be better even for a stick men. Just wish it could be longer tho.